Synthesis Crit

I had my Synthesis crit today where I showcased my idea to the rest of the group. The way that my practical would synthesise with the written element is that it would show an example of a well-rounded, developed female character from the research that I have looked in from my written element.

I got a lot of feedback from the presentation. One of the main points that people made is that the character I have made is too androgynous. This is a fair point as I wanted to avoid a more traditional female shape in animation, however I know it is important that the audience can identify that the character is female straight away. This practical will be difficult as what makes a good character is ultimately subjective, however with the research I have I believe I can make an educated attempt at it.